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Lady Of Death
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:59:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lady,
This being is the nightmare of humans
When she breathes, her breath is the stench of a thousand corpses
Thin, leather stitches cover her dried lips
Long, razor teeth decay yellow to the root
Her skin is infected with burnt scars
Of,
Her shriek is more terrible than a banshee’s cry
Stringy hair has been torn out in blood clumps
Rancid, curling nails dig into her dead hands
In her hand, she holds a drooping, black rose,
A symbol for the deeds she does
Death,
Is like an evitable disease,
On which she bring on brooding wings
To those who are dying or those who aren’t
In a sea of flourishing humans,
She takes her innocent pick
Lady Of Death,
Her black rose brushes along your head,
Seeds of black poison dig into your head,
They soon kill off your throbbing brain,
Whomever she chooses, she knows they deserve
They deserve the dark rose of death
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Crimson_Rose
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Re: Lady Of Death
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by EternalNight4x on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:06:18 PM AEST
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| very dark and morbid write..great choice of words and very descprivtive...well keep up the great posts |
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Re: Lady Of Death
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:19:56 PM AEST
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| excellent write and diction. very nice format, clever in fact. |
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Re: Lady Of Death
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by hazelnut on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:09:00 PM AEST
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| i like morbid. powerful descriptions. i can picture her already |
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Re: Lady Of Death
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:59:54 AM AEST
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A very powerful, morbid poem. Keep on writing.
Luv xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Lady Of Death
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:38:38 PM AEST
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Awsome..........
very very dark.and i love it. |
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