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Splintered Dreams
Contributed by
ThornMEngla
on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 06:50:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You notched our
names into the maple tree,
and fit your body
close with mine as we stood
in the driving rain
that spring day.
Softly, you
smoothed my hair and said, "This spot
is where we'll build our
home with hammered oak and
bright windows made of
painted glass."
Your pencil
still remains on splintered wood.
As I stand in snow
covered leaves, on our spot,
I call your name and
curse the sky.
Copyright ©
ThornMEngla
... [
2002-07-19 18:50:27]
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Re: Splintered Dreams
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 03:45:30 AM AEST
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This is beautiful and so very sad...it moved me..
Chrissie |
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Re: Splintered Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:06:02 AM AEST
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| wow, i felt every word you wrote... love this poem, hugs nessa |
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