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Sadistic Angel
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A sadistic angel
Only longing for pain
A blade across flesh
With the blood to drain
Watching the crimson blood
Cascade form within
A malevolent life
Filled with anger and sin
Lusting the burn
From a wound freshly made
The extent of her torment
She is unafraid
A malicious angel
Fury burns in her core
The anguish of others
Is what she adores
To slit them and slice them
Until they reach death
Robbing them of their
Last gasping breath
With a twisted mind
And bitter thoughts
The demise of others
Is what she brought
A devil from paradise
An angel from hell
Not a place left
For her to dwell
Callous towards humans
To angel’s she’s vengeful
And demon’s she envies
For escaping this hell-hole
Cursed to wander this world
With her sadistic mind
A place to belong
She can only hope to find
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EternalNight4x
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2004-12-16 19:57:57]
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Re: Sadistic Angel
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:14:57 PM AEST
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| This really does sound like me |
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Re: Sadistic Angel
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:18:11 PM AEST
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| kEEP THIS ***** UP..I dig the style and dig you write. |
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Re: Sadistic Angel
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by Thegirlwithsolittle on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:19:02 PM AEST
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| this is actually a v.v.v.v.good poem. very well written and i can realate totally. ths girl in my class cuts herself an it scares me, i am not even really her friend (but not an ememy) and i am deathly concerned!!! keep it up!!!!!! |
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Re: Sadistic Angel
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by DeeMeister on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:07:04 AM AEST
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| This poem is so well written and made more poingnant by the perversion of the idea of an angel. |
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