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Poems of Absolute and Perfect Beauty
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:26:55 PM in AEST
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The Fist time
The first time I saw you is the first time I felt whole
The first time I felt I had a purpose the first time I knew my place
I knew I had to make it by your side for always
I knew I had to win you over and make you mine for always
Then you read to me from a book of your soul
Then you read to me the words that made me fall for you even more
I found your true beauty and greatness in your genius’s ways
I found your true beauty and a brilliant light that will never ever fade
I loved you then as much as I do now and will only love you more as the sun goes down
I loved you then as much as I do now I will want you always in every way I know how
A collaged Beauty
The colors from the sun setting sky
Colors that fill you kind face, hair, and eyes
The snow on the peeks of a mountains height
Gave to your skin a soft pale tone that shimmers in light
The white plums from that grow around the world covered by the seeds that fell
Gave to your skin a sweet smell and to your mouth ways to make me dwell
On your lips after a kiss and make me want you more
Kisses that have me needing you to haunt me and help me sore
I am bound by the great beauty I have found in your soul
With out what I see in you I would be broken and never feel whole
This world of mine has given to you bits and pieces of it to make your beauty true
Because I have dreamed of them and asked them for you through and through
I have wanted you for the longest time, someone to inspire me and free my heart
To inspire and fill my mind, to help me feel like I am not alone and so torn apart
This world has made you everything to me and that is something you will always be
This is why I say I love you and also this is why I say yours is a collaged beauty
You are everything beautiful this world can give everything in you makes me want to live
You are a girl more beautiful than all my dreams, I would give you the world if it were mine to give
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Re: Poems of Absolute and Perfect Beauty
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by shattered_heart on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:47:42 PM AEST
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Aww I love them! Good write, keep writing ones about beauty. They are so descriptive and touch me in a way I can't explain.
- Rachelle |
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Re: Poems of Absolute and Perfect Beauty
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:03:07 PM AEST
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your wrote for someone else, and not for yourself. where is your heart in this? where is your passion? why care what others think? we all die, so why bother impressing them?
my motto: Why Care What You Think of Me, When You'll Just Forget Me. |
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Re: Poems of Absolute and Perfect Beauty
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:17:44 PM AEST
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collaged beauty
Thats a wonderful phrase..collaged beauty.. a beauty made of of many things..what a beautiful piece of art your poem is. I hope it gets as many comments as it deserves..but never more than any of mine. that would be three at most..rotflmao.. hehe |
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Re: Poems of Absolute and Perfect Beauty
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:22:09 AM AEST
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| Wow ... lol that's is great, emotionally touching |
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Re: Poems of Absolute and Perfect Beauty
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by little_genna on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:14:03 AM AEST
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Collage beauty.....
that is just so tender and amazing...
I love that poem so much..........
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