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Am I less Of A Man?
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Am I less of a man if I
Stopped following my lie?
Took a dive for love
And followed that little white dove?
To the one I fell in love with when I met?
When I was just a kid denying it?
Am I less of a man?
That I fell in love and admitted I can?
I gave in to the fact.
Love was something I lacked.
But the one I fell for,
Turned away and shut the door.
Am I less of a man if I feel the pain of losing you?
Of not acting like a big shot and having feelings too?
But I see the truth in your eyes.
Sadly, our love for each other never dies.
Admitting that am I less of a man?
Nothing else matters if I you can
Love me like I love you and not fear it.
Allowing ourselves to explicit.
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frozensuicide
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2002-11-28 09:00:00]
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Re: Am I less Of A Man?
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:13:20 AM AEST
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You seem to be speaking my life out with your words, i love reading poems like yours, it helps me to survive......
G*R
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Re: Am I less Of A Man?
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by OreO on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST
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This is beautifully written..
and it's so sad...i enjoyed this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Am I less Of A Man?
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 08:06:30 AM AEST
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i cant stop reading this poem its beuatiful, please get in touch with me,
love gem x x x |
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Re: Am I less Of A Man?
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by bopeep on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:38:40 PM AEST
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| that's so touching. a moment to reflect. ::sniffs:: is this one of frickinflamer's poems? why doesn't he just submit them under his? makes you seem uhmm... confused. |
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