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falling
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:55:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I lost it all.
Nothing to give.
Nothing to gain.
I am a wreck.
I'm a mess just like you.
Again I cried.
I screamed.
I bled.
And I fell to the stereotype.
Congratulations.
You were right.
I was right.
You win.
I lose.
How does it feel.
To put people down.
To give them a label.
What about you...
What would yours be?
If we took all you had to offer away...
What would your name be then?
I could call you *****.
And hate you like you hate me.
I could burn you.
Watch your eyes change.
See you bow to me.
Come crawling.
Come all.
Ritcous downfall.
I'm me.
And your you.
And that's the only label we need.
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2004-12-16 12:55:45]
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Re: falling
(User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:59:13 PM AEST
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| Excellent write... Very impressive. I can relate to that feeling. |
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Re: falling
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by catharinep on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:28:04 PM AEST
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| Very good write..flows well..lots of feeling put forth... |
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