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Forbidden Love
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Take your hands off my heart
and give me the release I need to re-start.
Visit me no more,
inflicting hopes and forbidden love
of never very sure
what we were thinking of.
My friend, my confidant -
Dark fate surrounded us
and all the things once felt free
are now locked away inside of me.
Forbidden love took a bite -
Burned my heart black and bled me white.
Into the pillow I scream at the night
while the candles flicker lifeless silence.
Helplessness binds my hands
in a way I've not felt before
and the trust I relied on
is not there anymore.
Losing touch of you
will be my greatest loss
like breathing in
no air at all.
Love intended pure & clean
will be the worst desolation I've ever seen.
Copyright ©
Red_October
... [
2004-12-16 12:54:05]
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:03:12 PM AEST
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| A very emotional write... Forbidden love is always hardest to turn away from. |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Nardo on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:48:02 PM AEST
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| You know what I I was thinking? I want to do what Jack Kerouac did, sort of. Just want to go! Write about not what I'm looking at but, what I see and not with physical eyes. Lots of people have done it, so why not me. Do you ever dream about that? It's easy when our monsters are real people. I just might do that! REALLY! |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 03:34:05 PM AEST
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wow what a vivid poem. I enjoyed it there was
a sense of realness and honesty that I am
sure was difficult to convey. Thanks for
sharing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Mangs on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:18:31 PM AEST
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amazingly expressive....i know what you are talking about...
xx Umang xx |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Stitch on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:21:58 AM AEST
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Losing touch of you
will be my greatest loss
The freedom and wisdom you gain will some day feel worth the loss. I know it doesn't feel that way now, but some day it will.
Stitch |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:11:03 AM AEST
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that was brilliant, so powerful.
i like your choice of words, in every poem but in this one particularly
"inflicting hopes" for example.
very good as always, different and outstanding. |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:30:27 PM AEST
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| sweetly sad. |
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