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What Once Was Broken
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:31:10 PM in AEST
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Quite impressive
How I can laugh, now
At the thoughts of you
That once hurt so badly to remember
Quite impressive
How what once was broken
Has been mended, with the simple passing of time
Dare I say, made better than before
I won't cry anymore, because it's over
Instead I'll smile, because it happened
And get on with my life
The heartache won't leave me bitter
Not after I've realized
How much I learned from it
And I swear to you
On everything I am
I won't regret loving you
I'll still miss you though
But not forever
With a little more time
I'll be over this
And you'll be the one left
Missing me
Copyright ©
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-12-16 12:31:10]
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Re: What Once Was Broken
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:19:29 PM AEST
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so true, time does heal all wounds...good write...I'm sure a lot of people can relate
Krystal |
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Re: What Once Was Broken
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:01:23 PM AEST
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| great attitude toward this situation. good write |
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Re: What Once Was Broken
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:28:08 PM AEST
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| Wow... I can kinda relate to this one! ^_^ Nicely written poem that only speaks the truth. You can only hurt as long as you let yourself hurt. :) |
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Re: What Once Was Broken
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:37:40 AM AEST
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| i like it ........it's really kool......i think you might be interested in my writing also.....so.....um.......if you want you should check me out sometime.......i mean .........my poetry, of course. keep up the good writing.....(i too am a teen poet)...(i read your profile thing-a-ma-jig) |
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