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The Freedom of Suicide
Contributed by
BennyJay
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:24:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I finally gave in,
and gave you my heart.
Stupid of me,
***** up on muh part.
Cuz as soon as I did,
you got taken away.
Didn't want you to go,
begged you to stay.
You left me behind,
with a broken heart.
Dont wanna live,
if we're apart.
I run over,
and grab a knife.
Cant go on,
gonna take my own life.
They all plead,
for me to stop.
But i'm so high,
almost on top.
The adrenaline rush
finally ends,
bringing me down,
back to all my friends.
They all crowd round,
only to see.
Just want to get out,
just want to be free.
I scream for freedom,
then liberty.
For the unheard voices,
inside of me.
"She's crazy!" they say,
"A lunatic!"
You know what I scream,
I dont give a frick!!!
Nothing you do
nothing you say,
could ever take my pain away.
Trapped inside of my own mind,
a prisoner of all mankind.
I've had my share of tragities,
now someone switch me places PLEASE!
Thats it,
I'm through.
I've had enough,
Things are gettin pretty rough.
Cant take the pain,
anymore.
Pull the trigger,
fall to the floor.
Copyright ©
BennyJay
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2004-12-16 11:24:41]
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Re: The Freedom of Suicide
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:37:29 PM AEST
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really intense...good write...just remember that no girl is worth considering suicide, there are so many other girls out there
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Re: The Freedom of Suicide
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by Artemis03 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:59:42 PM AEST
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| Very intriguing.. Beautiful write.. Don't you ever stop writing...Express ya self |
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