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°°°Sharon°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
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Sitting in the car one day
Our mom drove really slow
I was around 16 i'd say
I didn't know where we'd go
I asked where are we going mom?
She smiled, and looked ahead
I knew that it was somewhere sad
The way she kept turning her head
When we arrived at the gates
I became very curious and sad
I wasnt sure what i'd see
It was a part of our mom's past
I saw your tiny headstone
I asked who you were
She said that is your sister
I just froze and looked at her
I didnt ask no more that day
Because it was so sad
But i asked about you later
Not long after i met my real dad
She said you only lived 2 days
That you were her very life
Just know that we do love you
And with you gone it don't seem right
I don't know if mom ever told you
Her favorite flower's named after you
"Rose of Sharon" is what she calls them
They remind her of Granny and you
I have one thing to say here
I love you very much
In my heart you'll live forever
You truly have all my love
-I Love You Sis-
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-28 06:30:00]
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 07:14:02 AM AEST
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Awww, Oreo...this is very sad... but well done..
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Nessiecat on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 11:19:36 AM AEST
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Hi OreO
Great poem but a very sad story. The things life throws at us are hard to understand.
It's a lovely write and and a fitting tribute to your sister XXX |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 10:44:06 AM AEST
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| How sad both sisters Barbara Ann & now Sharon! I was really touched by both! Christina |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 05:17:28 PM AEST
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| You have lived a hard life babe. I wish happiness and peace to you from this day on. Another great write that tugs at the heart. Larry |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:07:02 AM AEST
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Gosh OreO,
This is sad but remember, that she is up there looking down apon you! Good write...
Panther |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 12:59:27 AM AEST
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i know good
work when i
read it peace :*) |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:51:29 PM AEST
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| this was very sad but beautiful. My name is Sharon Rose. I know she loves you also and is watching over you |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Chanti on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 12:52:15 AM AEST
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Hey Oreo! This poem brought tears to eyes. It is amazingly written and your heart glows through the words with pain and love for Sharon.
xo Chanti * |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 03:38:32 AM AEST
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| Such a pretty name Sharon really.......i have had that name cross my path lately.....this is a heartfelt sad write.....take care....tanya...:-) |
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Re: °°°Sharon°°°
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:55:48 PM AEST
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As I was shown a life now gone, I found a love I had never known. May the peace of love find you never wanting.
wordsy. |
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