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Sorrows tears bleed
Contributed by
Sapphire_Blue
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:49:02 AM in AEST
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Bleeding Sorrows
In my heart my tears bleed,
Emotional release I need,
I my hands my love lingers,
Slowly draining through my fingers,
I can not hold on to you anymore,
Let god giude you to heavens door,
Find peace my love for I have none,
Why couldnt I save you and my son?
I cannot live without you two in my life,
Words written in blood from my own knife.
By Sapphire_Blue
Copyright ©
Sapphire_Blue
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2004-12-16 07:49:02]
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:49:38 AM AEST
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short and deep, a very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by givingin on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:44:11 AM AEST
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Short,
but very deep in amotion,
GREAT WRITE!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by givingin on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:44:28 AM AEST
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Short,
but very deep in emotion,
GREAT WRITE!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by hot-shot on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:01:20 AM AEST
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nice one!!!...
hot-shot |
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:50:58 PM AEST
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short and yet sooo powerful.......excellent job....i loved it....awesome poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 08:20:20 AM AEST
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Great write deep and powerful message within.
GOOD JOB.
P.S Thank for the comment on my poem.
To understand it's message read my poem
I HAVE AIDS.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:40:43 PM AEST
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| Love it. The flow of it is awesome. |
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