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My Dark And Endless Silence
Contributed by
redtempest13
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I feel as if I'm in a world of silence,
A world of dark and endless silence,
It makes me feel so empty,
Empty and confused,
It confuses my whole body,
Mind and spirit too,
I'm at one with everything,
The land, the sea, the air,
Yet the silence keeps on drifting,
Drifting me away,
It drifts me into darkness,
It drifts me into space . . .
I'm so at one with everything, the land, the sea, the air,
Yet in this dark and endless silence, I myself am just not there.
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2004-12-16 07:25:30]
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Re: My Dark And Endless Silence
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:26:17 AM AEST
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very emotional and deep,
pixie xx |
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Re: My Dark And Endless Silence
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:45:45 AM AEST
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Wow that was a very deep write, jope everything goes great soon.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: My Dark And Endless Silence
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by Dan666 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:46:34 AM AEST
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great emootinal poem. just keep your chin and you'll be ok!
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