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My Heart Is Bruised
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:36:08 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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My heart still feels bruised,
From years of being used & abused,
Being hurt over & over again,
It is battered from all the pain.
You cradle it in your loving arms,
Try & keep it from coming to harm,
But the cold still manages to seep through,
Makes me shiver & it makes me feel blue.
It hurts sometimes as it beats so slow,
I think I’ll feel pain as long as the wind blows,
I feel each knock that life throws my way,
I never thought for so long it would stay.
Can you tell me that I can win?
I can crawl out of the depression bin,
It follows me around like a big, dark cloud,
Not letting me smile as I am not allowed.
Hold my heart & please don’t you drop it,
Lift me up out of this dark & dingy pit,
Love me like you’ve never loved before,
Help me to one day swim to the shore.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:12:51 AM AEST
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it's been a while since i last heard from you... sorry to hear that you still feel so bad.
"you're always gonna have these scars.
it's just i question of letting them go"... or at least that''s what people say to me. if only they know how HARD and PAINFUL that is!
... *sob*
any way... best luck for the future...
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:27:37 AM AEST
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Pix this is such a sad poem, very well writen and composed by a true poet.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:35:53 AM AEST
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So much agony and sorrow, I read your poetry and see happiness...then sorrow, I dont know how you can bare to carry so much much pain within...it is so heartwrenching to see you suffer so.
Beautiful poem...so much feeling woven in to the write...it shows much stregth to open up your heart with words..
Peace to you always
Myst
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by MMISS on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:00:20 AM AEST
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| pixie, maybe my latest poem will give you some comfort. try it and who knows what will happen! |
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:07:31 AM AEST
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all your writes are so powerful and emotional pix, there's a lot going on in that head of yours, great stuff.
Johnny. |
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by Mangs on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
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hm...just read one of your happy ones before this.....im really confused....are u happy or sad...but a very good write nevertheless.... :-)
xx Umang. xx |
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by midian on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:05:28 PM AEST
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| To read such an overwhelmingly sad poem like this has left an impression on me.. I used to suffer from depression, but it does get better if the right person helps! :) I thought this was an amazing poem..xx Carly |
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by Thegirlwithsolittle on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:35:18 PM AEST
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this is a vry good poem...i also wanted to thank you for commenting on my poems.som of them arent the best but you allways put encourageign stuff. i have read your other poems and they are all so powerfull!!!!!!!!!!!thanx and i hope you feel lots better!
xnellyx |
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Re: My Heart Is Bruised
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:00:26 PM AEST
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My smile has been taken to Pixie.
Over the past few weeks i have been suffering from what I can only describe as hell.
I feel for you and can relate to every single word in this.
Hoping we both find our smiles soon.
Excellent poem Pixie you write so well
love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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