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Mind of the Blade
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:59:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The mind of a blade is simple at best
its only thought is to peirce or to slice
and watch as the blood trickles down your chest
the thought of it freeing you is just so nice
the blade alone has no power
it's you that is the one that must move it
and cut gently giving you a bloody shower
leaning back in the chair of which you sit
the mind of the blade knows not what it does
it is but a pawn in your simple plans
you make the thoughts occur, and this is because
you place it into your bloodstained hands
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2004-12-15 22:59:37]
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Re: Mind of the Blade
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:32:11 AM AEST
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Re: Mind of the Blade
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:21:25 AM AEST
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i quite agree with you here.
you've said this well, but if were to improve this i'd try making it a little longer. |
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