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i know i love her
Contributed by
sek-c-shaun
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:41:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i know i love her
i'm just afraid to admit it
i know i want her
i'm just afraid to believe it
how long this will last
i may never know
it happened so fast
so how could i show
how much i love her
in that short period of time
but sometime in the future
i hope she'll be mine
mine to hold
and mine to care for
mine to show
that i'll be there for her
i know i love her
and i'm afraid to admit it
but maybe someday
she'll be able to depict it
someday when
the stars are bright
someday when
we lay in the night
hand in hand
the wind will blow
and that is when
she will know
how much i love her
how much i care
she'll finally realize
that i'll be there
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Re: i know i love her
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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ahh, unrequited love. its a tough thing. i love the simple yet deep word choice. great format too, flowed very well. keep it up good job
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Re: i know i love her
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by girish on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:37:57 PM AEST
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yeah nice poem i felt your love for your person good read my poems on love in general like "The Gift of your eye sight" "What is your love?" etc and comments invited
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Re: i know i love her
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:35:53 AM AEST
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Aww that was really nice, sweet poem. i like it.
Hugs,
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Re: i know i love her
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:41:36 AM AEST
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| Great write. Very heartfelt |
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Re: i know i love her
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:07:01 AM AEST
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| this was another great one! if someone wrote this way about me...i would be breathtaken!! ur a beautiful write |
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Re: i know i love her
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:29:25 PM AEST
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awwwwwwwww very nice and sweet.
Nice poem I liked it^_^ |
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