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Making It
Contributed by
MMISS
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:54:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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sailing through clouds of cotton
thinking on things forgotten
do we remember this
was it just an ordinary kiss
walking on roads of pavement
saying those words we say that
make us wish we didn't
speak those we said
lying in fields of clover
gleeful that we recover
making the love as lovers
sleeping under the cover
Copyright ©
MMISS
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2004-12-15 21:54:09]
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Re: Making It
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:55:35 AM AEST
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| good write but im dumb and didnt understand it |
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Re: Making It
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by Saint_41 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:37:45 PM AEST
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this is nice. good write.
*+*SAINT*+* |
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