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Hiding Among The Maple Leaves

Contributed by hoist1atca on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems




Far to the north beneath a blanket of trees-
Hides a flower amongst the maple leaves-
To sad to shine with colors so bright-
Filled with the pain of loves fading light…

Feeling all alone and empty inside-
Her heart, this flower has chosen to hide-
Seeking shelter from any emotional storm-
Has become, for this blossom the norm…

Life offered her many a selection to make-
So many paths for her to take-
A lifetime of love is that which she chose-
And from this choice her present life arose…

What once she felt to be true-
Has left her alone without a clue-
A wilting flower between thicket and thorn-
From within, a soul forever torn…

Now when the north winds do blow-
Her pain begins to slowly grow-
And her smile fades beneath a blanket of trees-
As this flower of nature hides amongst the maple leaves…


(12-15-2004)










Copyright © hoist1atca ... [ 2004-12-15 21:26:02]
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Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:33:01 PM AEST
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awwww this made me cry so very beautiful yet weeping with sadness touched me down deep I feel this I do now Im going to wipe my eyes
Michelle


Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:40:12 PM AEST
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excellent write. and nice dedication.


Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:21:01 AM AEST
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Wow, this is very beautiful...
I definatly think I've been missing out on reading your poetry. Definatly.

This is fantastic, it flows just perfectly, and every word leaves me wanting to read another one.

Fantastic write.
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:18:24 PM AEST
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Joe~

Each verse captured the emotion perfectly. You have quite
a gift. This was beautiful and yet so tragically sad.
With love and light, the wilted flower will once again blossom.
Thank you for sharing this.

~Breezy




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