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My Last Breath
Contributed by
Jakenstein
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Everyday
Seems like a waste
Living for nothing
Just taking up space
I draw in my last breath
As I sit and wait for my death
All the time
I'm all alone
I've grown up
In this broken home
I sit here with my knife
Waiting to take my life
I can't take it anymore
So I'll let my body hit the floor
The last thing I'll do
Is leave my bloody mess for you
I don't think anyone will cry
To hear that I might die
The world will be a better place
When it's rid of this discrace
I live my life in vain
Always living in pain
So on the wake of my death
I draw in my last breath
If only you knew
Of all the things I've gone through
You could take away the pain
That keeps driving me insane
Will I take my life tonight?
Chances are that I might
If you don't help soon
I'll have sung my final tune
I'm drawin in my last breath
And waiting for my ultimate death
There's nothing left for me to do
All I want you to know is that I love you
Copyright ©
Jakenstein
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2004-12-15 21:11:50]
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Re: My Last Breath
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:34:12 AM AEST
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| I like this.. |
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Re: My Last Breath
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:42:15 PM AEST
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this pewom is very sad, it sounds like you wabt to but have found some reason to not. just know that even though it seems pointless to go on there will always be something better weaiting for you.
this was a very good poem, nice solid rythem, steady flow, very easy and fun to read. please post more for all to read.
don't loos hope if you need help we are all here willing and ready.
God bless. |
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Re: My Last Breath
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by Crash on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:34:53 PM AEST
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| I can really feel the emotion in this. I have been there before. this is a great poem, I hope you stay to write more |
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Re: My Last Breath
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:22:51 AM AEST
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Great poem.
I'm all alone
I've grown up
In this broken home
You're not alone. |
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