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My Body Cried
Contributed by
ZiltzWiltz
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:12:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I made my body cry last night
My arms and my stomach, my wrists and my legs
Cried and cried all me and my body to sleep
And even in sleep
They cried through my dreams
And when I awoke
My body still was stained with its tears
That it cried through the night
And cried from my fears
And now that its had a good cry
Im just a little more ready
Just a little more prepared
For the day I have to face
For school, for people, for talking and walking
For moving with the crowd, and just not fitting in
But my body will get through today
And my body will be ready
Yes tonight, when its right,
My body and I
Will have us another good cry again.
Copyright ©
ZiltzWiltz
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2004-12-15 19:12:23]
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Re: My Body Cried
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:14:56 PM AEST
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| this is deep man, 5 stars all the way. |
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Re: My Body Cried
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:38:54 PM AEST
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this is great...feels like it could be somethng that i can relate to...i really liked it...excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: My Body Cried
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST
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| wow, very good, well done!! |
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Re: My Body Cried
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:59:21 PM AEST
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I now what you mean, it is hard to get through life not fitting in but there is always a way. wrtiting is what has helped me alot.
this was an excalent poem it had lots of meaning and feeling to it. very good writing. please post again.
read you later. God bless. |
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