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me?
Contributed by
athena
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:45:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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all these feelings...
just built up so high
i feel like im gonna burst
i just wanna cry
i dont know who am
or where i just might land
im just an emty vessle
washed up in the sand
no one knows me
and nobody can
im just shadows of others
made up of every man
but if i knew who i was...
i could be set free
but instead i will always be...
an emty soul alone on the sea
Copyright ©
athena
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2004-12-15 18:45:39]
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Re: me?
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by Apolla on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:01:59 PM AEST
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| Oh, Athena this is truely a beautiful poem. You are so expressive you just need to find your voice within and stop caring what others think of you so much. Speak your mind. *hugs* |
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Re: me?
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by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:02:31 PM AEST
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| i liked it, it was very good lol i cant really say much else |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:13:14 PM AEST
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| this is excalty how I feel most of the time!!! Great job capturing the feelings! |
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Re: me?
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:52:57 PM AEST
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| ::tears up:: Athena....Goddess to Goddess....this is such an emotional deep beautifully written poem. I felt your pain....it hurts I know... Speak ya heart girl..let me know..let us know. cuz we are here for you.. ALWAYS! Luv ya. Artemis |
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Re: me?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:39:09 PM AEST
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Once you learn to like yourself other people will automatically like you because you will exude an air of self assurance. That is the hardest part of teen angst. Everyone worries what everyone else thinks. It is what YOU think that is important in you life. Not what they think. You know what is right and wrong for you and it differs for different people. I hope this helps and you feel better soon in your life.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: me?
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:45:25 PM AEST
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Good poem-
To find yourself keep writting-
Always say what you feel and not what you think-
Joe |
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