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Maybe now you'll miss me...
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:33:45 PM in AEST
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You fell through my finger tips like water in cold hands.
Goodbye she says as glass breaks on the other end of the phone.
So I'll leave you like you left me their.
My chance is gone.
I try to feel but im broken down from empty spaces.
Her eyes are closed.
You'd think by now I'd leave it alone.
Goodbye she says.
I remeber like its yesterday.
I never tryed to save her.
Its so hard to repalce her.
My hands are cold.
I shed my eyes.
Maybe now you'll miss me.
You fell from my finger tips like water in condense.
Like water in cold hands.
Maybe now you'll miss me.
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Re: Maybe now you'll miss me...
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by Apolla on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:37:46 PM AEST
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| A beautiful write which really made me think. |
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Re: Maybe now you'll miss me...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:18:36 PM AEST
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| another great one Mortis |
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Re: Maybe now you'll miss me...
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by Mangs on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:09:10 PM AEST
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beautifully written....loved it to the last verse...
xx Umang. xx |
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Re: Maybe now you'll miss me...
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:40:46 PM AEST
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very interesting and very beautifully written...i loved it...great job...excellent poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Maybe now you'll miss me...
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:33:53 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Maybe now you'll miss me...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:12:49 AM AEST
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very good write, amazingly written,
pixie xx |
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