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Save Me
Contributed by
pleasure_is_pain103
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your love is like a nightmare
Haunting me in my dreams
I'll never love another
At least that's how it seems
You broke my heart a long time ago
But love is an emotion
Thats too hard to control
The tingle of your touch
Still lingers in my nerves
I really don't think this emptiness
Is what I deserve
It's like a little flame
surrounding my heart
It inches closer to the center
the longer we're apart
So come and save me
Only you can put out the flame
And soothe this chaos
That keeps erupting in my veins
Touch me sweetly
And let me surrender to your voice
Because living without you
Is not even a choice...
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pleasure_is_pain103
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2004-12-15 18:03:26]
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Re: Save Me
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:02:38 AM AEST
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i really liked that, thought it had a good flow and the rhymes didn't seem to forced.
"the tingle of your touch
still lingers in my nerves"
especially liked those lines.
good job! |
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Re: Save Me
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:05:12 PM AEST
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| Very good job on this one..I really liked it |
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Re: Save Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 08:10:24 PM AEST
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i love this poem...and i often feel the same way
great write
-Bethani- |
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