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Drais' Tale VI. Caves of Diamond Memories
Contributed by
Lee
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:42:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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"If you are
A June bug of doom
Where are your jittery-critter wings?"
"They are hidden, of course.
Perhaps I will show you."
It is getting late this very hour
And at this very hour
There are new acquaintances
Being made
"Don't you just love this shade?"
In a cocoon of love (damp cave)
Having a perfectly refined moment
"Do you like diamond memories, my dear?
They are those from whence
You were a child
And those you are
Making with me by your side."
"Are you missing their world yet?
Do you know the concept of misery
And what it is to suffer for eternity?"
....
"Ah, Professor Lebretu,
A fine time
To dine
With us.
Come in,
Won't you?"
Copyright ©
Lee
... [
2004-12-15 13:42:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Drais' Tale VI. Caves of Diamond Memories
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 02:03:13 PM AEST (User
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That one got a bit confusing ... Going to have to reread a time or two.
Good words and imagery ... but my understanding is gone.
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