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Waves of Aggression
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:17:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The depths of the ocean
Far to oblivious to our kind
Has swept its layers upon our ground
Crowning its self king
Mocking what used to be
With nothing but waves of aggression
Leaking from our swollen bodies
We lay at rest
Beneath our own mistakes…
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2004-12-15 13:17:45]
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Re: Waves of Aggression
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:41:26 PM AEST
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| I like this. It's well written and well put together. |
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Re: Waves of Aggression
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 02:05:26 PM AEST
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Woah powerfulness!
This is so good for such a short piece!
Love it..... |
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Re: Waves of Aggression
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by Red_October on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:37:00 PM AEST
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| So much said in just a few words. I lay not at rest beneath my mistakes, but it is something I wish for. Limp, maybe, but not at rest. I like what you put into this piece. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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