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Wait And Bleed
Contributed by
crash
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:09:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm a self mutalist
the scars I bear
You don't have to look hard
to know that they are there
But who would cut themselves
just for fun?
Or are they just reminders
of a game never won?
My scars represent
part of what I feel
Painful reminders
when they heal
I hurt myself,
another fresh cut
As each new wound opens,
another door to my heart is shut
I use them as a reminder
never to try
Because everytime I fail
I just want to die
Another fresh cut,
strait across the chest
This one finishes
the work of the rest
No one thought I'd die
they never took heed
Dying, I laugh at them,
As I wait and bleed
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crash
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2004-12-15 13:09:00]
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Re: Wait And Bleed
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by xfrozenwindx on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:28:21 PM AEST
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Wow! That is sad but such a good write. Hope you don't feel this way....
-Ashley |
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Re: Wait And Bleed
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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Going through all of your fntastic poetry, I am shocked that one man, not even 18 yet, could ever feel such pain. I feel this poem though, I have been there myself.
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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Re: Wait And Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 08:08:48 PM AEST
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I really feel for you. Im a self mutilator myself and I know what you are going through. I want to give you a hug but as long as you have friends, you will get through this.
Hang in there,
Jillian |
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