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Cold
Contributed by
Mangs
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This frosty attitude...
seems bland, Pale -
No subtle fancies can cause a reaction...
Nor, no words of distaste.
This cold slowly, surely
grows dense and indifferent
And then, there can be no way
To reach out,
For even so little,
As a lingering touch
Copyright ©
Mangs
... [
2004-12-15 13:05:19]
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Re: Cold
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by xfrozenwindx on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:08:05 PM AEST
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Great write! I loved it so mcuh! Hope to see more of your work soon!
-Ashley |
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Re: Cold
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:19:45 PM AEST
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i felt this sweetie....
it holds so much power in so few words.... |
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Re: Cold
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:17:21 AM AEST
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yes a very strong and powerful write, in such a few lines :) great write,
pixie xx |
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