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Stolen Twilight
Contributed by
aceJace
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:39:24 AM in AEST
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Just give me the dusk,
in that sliver before color turns gray,
for only with you,
dare I look upon the coming of night.
Let me see you in that way,
nothing imagining,
and I will swim across the sky
to tilt the moon for your eyes.
If you let me,
I will whisper your name in fever,
satisfying the essence of you,
and pause to breathe the soft glow
of bodies keeping time.
When the dead of light takes you from me,
will you long for the way I
looked at you in that stolen moment?
Yes, all I want is the dusk,
sun and stars are yours,
but twilight is where I wait for your heart.
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aceJace
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2004-12-15 10:39:24]
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Re: Stolen Twilight
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:03:32 AM AEST
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i like this poem but if you start rhyming keep rhyming if not it sometimes breaks the flow
sill a very nice write |
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Re: Stolen Twilight
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by wray on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:10:13 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful! I love the concept and the way you wrote it. "Just give me the dusk..... Yes, all I want is the dusk" - lovely. |
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