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One Sweet Day
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:49:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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One sweet day
All my hurt will go away,
Leave me alone for good,
Let me live as I should.
I worry about everything,
Stops my heart from being able to sing,
Gets in the way of our love,
Gives the relationship a great, big shove.
I hate myself sometimes,
Hurting you is my biggest crime,
I am sorry after the row,
To put it right I don’t know how?
I drink to cope with stuff,
That just makes the tide more rough,
As I drink so much,
That with my feelings I lose touch.
I ruin everything you deserve more,
Than being with me, a drunken whore,
You are such a sweet man,
To hurt you was never in my plan.
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2004-12-15 08:49:20]
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:52:58 AM AEST
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aww pix i'm sure if he saw this poem he'd begin to understand.
Johnny. |
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:53:21 AM AEST
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This was a beautiful write pixie.
In the end you said "I ruin everything you deserve more,
Than being with me, a drunken whore,
You are such a sweet man,
To hurt you was never in my plan."
but you must remember, he's with you because he loves you for who you are, not for what you do.
MUAH much love
*~givingin~*
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:58:13 AM AEST
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Awww pixie!!!
I can tell you're hurting right now, this must of been quite painful to write, hope it works out for you. You're a sweet girl that deserves some happiness, take one day at a time and stay strong, I'm sure there's lots of people that beleive in you, I do.
Take care, be thinking of you!
Ali xx |
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by MMISS on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:37:05 AM AEST
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| MY HEART HURTS FOR YOU PIXIE! IV'E GOT REAL TEARS IN MY EYES, FOR YOU. I WISH YOU THE PEACE THIS CHRISTMAS SEASON. YOU KNOW JESUS REALLY IS THE REASON. AND WE ALL CARE ABOUT YOU. REMEMBER THIS FOR US. |
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:23:24 AM AEST
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Very sad but written beautifully.
Take it easy on yourself girl.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:08:43 AM AEST
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| great and happy almost write but if this is to Mark i am sure he forgives you |
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Re: One Sweet Day
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:45:09 PM AEST
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| booze is a depressent.. it makes things worse..why do you thinks booze rhymes with lose? LOL.. liquor rhymes with quicker.. rotfl.. candy is dandy..but liquor is quicker ... I can't drink so I eat.. aww my pix.. good write but I'd rather a bad write and you felt no pain :-( |
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