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Parallel Lines....
Contributed by
Mangs
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:46:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We walked side by side,
Like parallel lines that never meet each other.
But I have miles to go,
Dreaming the lines will meet.
I build my house in a marsh...
But I could not have built my dreamy house in a marsh.
Because I am homeless.
I never calculate what I got or lost...
Sorrow or happiness, love or hate.
Still when I sit in the dark...
I think you receive not a single bit,
Of what I gave you thoughout my whole life.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-12-15 08:46:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Parallel Lines....
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:04:22 PM AEST (User
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This is a different way to look at your situation...or even mine i guess......
love always
Stace xx |
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Re: Parallel Lines....
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST (User
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I love the first stanza. Nice write.
--amanda-- |
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