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I Am Your Rival
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:56:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Depression I am your rival,
Don’t think much of your chance of survival,
I am back to end your miserable reign,
I am here to dish out to you some pain.
See if you like the taste of your own medicine,
Watching you die will be so much fun,
You thought you’d won, thought I was weak,
I was just waiting for my strength to reach its peak.
It has now & you are in so much trouble,
I’d advise you to move your arse on the double,
Get out of my way out of my sight,
You're alive by day but will be dead by the fall of night.
I am worth ten of you maybe even more,
With you it is time to settle my score,
Years I have lost because of you & your crap,
I took the blame & I took all the wrap.
But times have changed as I am now whole,
I will revel in crushing your soul,
You can count on me spitting all over you,
I’ll hand out my punishment until you’re black & blue
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-15 07:56:55]
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:04:15 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:11:19 AM AEST
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wow powerful write Pixie
you just keep them coming....well done
a nice read
inoc |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:48:45 AM AEST
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Creative write,
i enjouyed reading this..
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by ButchCorpuz on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:50:08 AM AEST
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Well, Pixie, you certainly beat the crap out of depression. If you're depressed, I sure hope that you overcome it, Because I sicerely believe that you can. Nice poem!
-Butch |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:13:27 AM AEST
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| Nice i have to say this poem you wrote with stye very creative it seem you really did beat depression.well done., |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:17:16 AM AEST
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| i like alot not quite happy but good when will you write something happy dang it |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:49:46 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem a lot. It's very expressive and deep. Great write. |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:35:57 PM AEST
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| ha! take that depression.. you take a lickin' but pixie keeps on tickin... hahahahha |
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Re: I Am Your Rival
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:53:23 PM AEST
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haha great poem I enjoyed this. A very
interesting take and also quite inspiring.
Keep up the great writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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