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When the night comes.....
Contributed by
ravisada
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:32:43 AM in AEST
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When the night comes then my tears wet my pillow
because you are not close to me and living far away
My nights become sleepless, dreamless and hopeless
and I feel that I am lost and don't know what to do
You are the love of my life that brings happiness to me
and there is no meaning to my life without you
The big distance put me through painful thoughts on you
and those Saturday nights bring me nothing but empty life
The moon's reflection enters into my bedroom with romance
but I stay there alone without your love as lonely
The stars are over crowded in the sky like diamonds
but I am nailed down without your love like a saint
The nights are very cold and you are not here to hold me
and bring you under my arms with passion of love
Tell me how to say good night when my eyes
are not closing for sleep without you being here
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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Re: When the night comes.....
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by bluebird on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:18:05 AM AEST
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far out...this is a beautifull piece of writing.
keep it up,thanx for posting it.
~keepthefaith~
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Re: When the night comes.....
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by neveryours on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:59:49 AM AEST
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Tell me how to say good night when my eyes
are not closing for sleep without you being here
Interesting to read. You have some power in expressing your emotion.
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Re: When the night comes.....
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:15:09 AM AEST
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When the night comes then my tears wet my pillow
because you are not close to me and living far away
I kinda do not like poems that start this way but the rest is really good but i still feel like you wanted to write something more to it |
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