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lucky star
Contributed by
holy
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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lucky star
the wind in winter squall
i was going home along
i heard your calling
and i could not stop make for
open handset and look at your communication
my heart allow myself smile and shy
i suck the merry cold wind crazy and licking my lips stealthily
"look the wind chop-chop
that is what my loving darling
lucky star make you warmth and all right by the wind taking"
with your warm message i was flying
love you dear lover i am yours agelong
leave trouble drop grief forget loneliness
love you dear sweetheart you are mine agelong
you are my lucky star in the life i havent any pity
wait me in home my lucky star
i will be back home soon sweetie
i would like to give you everything that you desire
because i know how do my best to my superest lucky star
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holy
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2004-12-15 07:12:48]
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Re: lucky star
(User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:52:11 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful write... readin it feels like a winter day with that speical someone.. Great job |
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Re: lucky star
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by Red_October on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:44:32 PM AEST
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| This is such pure lovely and words wrapping around feelings like silk. Very well penned. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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