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Winter
Contributed by
Crow
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:04:53 AM in AEST
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Its winter where I sit
hands so cold as I lift
hot liquid to drink, in thought.
Dreariness of the day
the sharp feeling of the wind
as it finds a way through
a small crack of the door
intensifies the bitter chill.
I look for brighter days
this isn`t helping
just seems to add to the burden.
if I had someone, it wouldn`t
be the just the months ahead,
it wouldn`t be trying to get warm.
I wouldn`t try to tuck myself
deeper into the blankets
deeper inside me.
snows will come and I think I`ll parish
it will cover everything, and let it rest,
I move to the window and the glass
is frosted over, like my heart I think
and scratch a small spot to peek out!
God`s country
and its so cold here.....
No...
Here in my heart...
Copyright ©
Crow
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2004-12-15 06:04:53]
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Re: Winter
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:15:38 PM AEST
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A very moving write...........I understand it now.
I hope you arent offended by me leaving a comment.
Good luck
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Re: Winter
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by Crow on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:34:38 PM AEST
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| not at all, you know what i`m talking about I`m sure. thanks for taking the time to read me. peace my friend, Crow |
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Re: Winter
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by wray on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:33:11 AM AEST
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| Mm very entertaining. I thought this was really sweet actually, the connection between winter and your lonely heart. Good luck on defrosting! |
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Re: Winter
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 01:36:46 AM AEST
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can't believe I missed this write...very well written tugs at the heart my friend
Shari |
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