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my tears seep through
Contributed by
lonely_boy
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:27:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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my tears seep through the cracks in my eyes
i was ripped apart by all of your lies
for so long i happened to believe you
i never thought that this you would do
i'm so scared of being left alone
this knife might go through the flesh and clear to the bone
though this is how i deal with all of the pain
there's so much anger i have for you in my veins
you say that you want me, but you don't ever show it
right now my love for you isn't worth all of this
i'm sorry to say it, but i'm just laying it down
when i saw this for myself, i fell, crying, to the ground
i'm so sad that we cannot be the same
if it doesn't work out, i'm the one to blame
i wanted to take it slow, but i just threw it away
let me leave to get lost in this miserable day
it's for our own good, don't you see
i can't help it if i want to bleed
i just met you, and you're falling for me
what did i do to make you this happy
you have failed to look beneath my skin
because you didn't know of my greatest sin
the sin is that i like to cut my arms
why is it you that my pain harms
why does it seem to make you cry
are you afraid that i might die
what exactly did i do to deserve this girl
i haven't done a good thing in this world
but you choose to stick right by my side
what would you do if i happened to die
i think of you and what we might do
as my head is down and my tears seep through
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2004-12-15 00:27:23]
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Re: my tears seep through
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:23:04 AM AEST
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Based on the poem the relationship doesn't sound healthy. It was also sad and filled with such raw emotion.
I liked the way you expressed your feelings.
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Re: my tears seep through
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:08:05 AM AEST
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great write....very touching. i know how u feel and what a love or a lost love can do to you...i can relate to "i'm so scared of being left alone
this knife might go through the flesh and clear to the bone
though this is how i deal with all of the pain
there's so much anger i have for you in my veins"...very powerful write. i kno how u feel. take care lonely boy.
luv punka rach
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