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Shards of Death
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:00:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sharpened shards of death
Come flying at my soul
Tearing me to pieces
It’s taking all control
It’s killing me so slowly
Making sure I suffer enough
Cannot leave me standing
Holding on is becoming tough
I’m falling to the floor
Broken like shattered glass
Nothing left of me
I didn’t think this pain would last
I can see the shadow of death
It haunts me in my dreams
It stands over me while I’m sleeping
And muffles all my screams
Soon it will be over
No more fight left inside
I will let go forever
And in deaths arms I will hide
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-12-14 23:00:06]
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Re: Shards of Death
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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| Woah. This is...awesome. I can see it...and feel it. Keep writing. And if you ever want to talk....I'm here. |
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Re: Shards of Death
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:10:52 PM AEST
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amazing write and so beautifully dark! Im loving it great job!!
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Shards of Death
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:35:53 AM AEST
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| A majorally gripping and intense write...had me on the edge of my seat...so excellently written...and in words that bought such a vivid reality...awesome poem. |
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Re: Shards of Death
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:20:00 AM AEST
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Such a powerful dark write, it has a nice flow. I like it.
Happy Holidays,
Jane x |
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Re: Shards of Death
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by Apolla on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:45:33 PM AEST
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| This has a great flow to it and paints picture in ones mind, and causes me to feel like the poem is being told about me. I love it... |
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Re: Shards of Death
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by SharonAngel on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:29:33 PM AEST
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| beautifully written...the depth of this write is unreachable...totally dark and a soothing at the same time...good work...keep it up. |
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