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Hopelessly Devoted

Contributed by fastpitchqt on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:52:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I can’t take it anymore
I can’t take not having you in my life
The pain won’t stop
The tears never end
This heart of mine never stops loving you and wanting you

I can’t come to my senses and let you go
I can’t let you out of my life
I let you out of my arms already and see where it left me

My life has emptiness to it now
The emptiness you once filled
You used to be my world
You used to be my happiness

But that’s all gone now since you went away
I would have and still would do anything for you
Just say those words and I’d come running

I wish I had it all back
I wish I had never let you out of these arms
I wish I had never had to say goodbye

This is more than I could handle
I don’t know how to deal with these emotions
I don’t know how to make them go away
I don’t know how to move on
I don’t know how to let you go

You are my everything
You are my heart
So how am I supposed to give you up now?
How am I just supposed to let it all slip away?

I feel lost without you
I would do anything for one more night with you
One more hug
One more kiss

I never expected to fall in love with you
I never expected to feel the things I feel
I never expected to find someone who became my world
I never expected for love to hurt so bad

So now I’m left here
Wishing and dreaming that the day will come
The day you will come back to me
The day I will regain my happiness and smile once more
The day my heart wont hurt anymore

Because I cant take it anymore
I can’t take not having you in my life
The pain won’t stop
The tears never end
This heart of mine never stops loving you and wanting you

I guess I’m just hopelessly devoted to you!




Copyright © fastpitchqt ... [ 2004-12-14 22:52:00]
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Re: Hopelessly Devoted (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:31:31 PM AEST
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sad way to feel when you love someone who doesn't return it. great story!


Re: Hopelessly Devoted (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:24:13 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, it is sad when people you do love dont return it. Beautiful poem.

Happy Holidays,
Jane x


Re: Hopelessly Devoted (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 10:59:25 AM AEST
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Wonderful. Full of emotion.

cat xx


Re: Hopelessly Devoted (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 08:01:30 PM AEST
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another great write... sorry u don't have this person in ur life nemore... i know how this feels...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes




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