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Argueing
Contributed by
fldadn1
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:44:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I see you smile
When I see you happy
It drives me wild
To be in your sight
To see each other
Eye to Eye
But im not for sure
the feeling hurts
when I worry about her
I thought I had trust
But I leave for awhile
And I'm left in the dust
But you cheer my up
And gradually
I fall in love
Now I'm scared again
Because there is argueing
Please don't leave with him...
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fldadn1
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2004-12-14 22:44:59]
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Re: Argueing
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:12:20 PM AEST
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this is different but i liked it .. different endings are awesome great job!!
peace and hope
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Re: Argueing
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:48:15 AM AEST
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a nice caring write for your friend
all the best
hope everything works out
Inoc |
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