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moon light
Contributed by
sek-c-shaun
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:18:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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as the night grows dark and the full moon rises
your essence flows in many sizes
your love is warm and very soothing
your words are fervent and intensley moving
your soul is high in the full moon light
for i'd reach to the sky with all my might
some memories faded and so are passing
some memories great and everlasting
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2004-12-14 21:18:13]
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Re: moon light
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by karmen on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:40:01 PM AEST
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i really like this poem.. it flows really well and its nice to read... good writing...
~karmen |
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Re: moon light
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:33:41 AM AEST
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Its short and smooth, i love it.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: moon light
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:38:51 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautifully smooth written poem. It says a lot for short write. Love it! |
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Re: moon light
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:09:25 AM AEST
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awww this is one of the best you've written i love it.
some memories faded and so are passing
some memories great and everlasting
that is an amazing stanza....u dont kno how much i can relate. well done! |
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