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Wasted words

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



She’s sitting, lying in her pretty blue tears
Candy dreams of all the things she knows she’ll never have
Painting promises on the floor in her blood
She drew lies in the skies with her own black hands

Delicate words sign away her soul
Stories of former beauty grew old
Days change, seasons pass
Hot to the core but her eyes turned cold

Pretty things on her skin draw her in
Voices always commit her sin
Fire and ice fight wars in her heart
But she will always win

It’s all too much and she wants the touch
The world’s a blur and her thoughts are undone
Broken leaves fall from the sky
Silent minds are beauty to none, not even one




Copyright © wyrd_faerie ... [ 2002-11-27 22:00:00]
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Re: Wasted words (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Angel_BabAy on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 11:59:06 PM AEST
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This poem is really good. I like it alot. Keep up the good work.


Re: Wasted words (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Angel_BabAy on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 11:59:08 PM AEST
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This poem is really good. I like it alot. Keep up the good work.


Re: Wasted words (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 03:30:01 PM AEST
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Its so good I going to buy some prozac so i can keep reading, I give it 5 stars.


Re: Wasted words (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 06:00:35 PM AEST
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Alot of your poetry that i read
reminds me of myself are you sure
i dont know you? LOL. i'm just kidding
but it does remind me of m yself
Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed
reading it. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Wasted words (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:39:04 AM AEST
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Its soooo good baby! one of your best i think. i love it.


Re: Wasted words (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:37:33 PM AEST
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this was beautiful I don't know how I missed this one. it was so emotional and well structured. I love the image of the black hands drawing lies that was just f*ckin great.

Bobo (Joel)




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