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SUGAR PLUMB
Contributed by
SidneyCid
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:51:06 PM in AEST
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November 30, 2004
SUGAR PLUMB
My sugar plumb is quite possessive,
Nasty tempered and aggressive
When agreeable the argument should be.
But being so ferocious,
Disputatious and atrocious,
Quite enchanting, but irascible is she.
So being so vivacious,
Amatory but pugnacious
I’m obliged to take her with a grain of salt.
So then she’s back defensive,
Demonstrative and offensive
Saying very plainly who it is at fault.
So being such a beauty,
But splenetic and a cutie,
We entangle and we get irascible,
And though we get splenetic,
Overzealous and pathetic,
Her delightfulness ensures it’s passable.
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Re: SUGAR PLUMB
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:58:47 PM AEST
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| Couldnt see the humor in the poem, but did laugh at my dumbness for not understanding half of the words used within your talented write...oh well maybe someone else will find the laughs hidden within. |
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Re: SUGAR PLUMB
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:40:30 PM AEST
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| it seems like all the "big" words make the best rhymes, but are the least rhymed. making up nonwords and rhyming them is also fun. =] |
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Re: SUGAR PLUMB
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:58:17 AM AEST
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Dear Dalton,
I loved your Sugar plum, she is vicious, fun loving, and great for you that I can see. I also found the humor and so it's to you I say HEHEHEEEE!
Loved this one Dalton, had to get out my dictionary, but after looking up all those big words...........could understand it much better
and it was free!
Warm Poetic hugs
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Re: SUGAR PLUMB
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:14:08 AM AEST
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lmao! well woven words and so refreshingly clever:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: SUGAR PLUMB
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:27:26 PM AEST
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A web of humor well-woven. I do think plumb should be plum but then that is trivial. I loved this poem.
Rita |
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