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My angels Fallen
Contributed by
Sapphire_Blue
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:47:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My Angels Fallen
A storm rages from within my heart,
One of beautiful and so full of love,
An inferno of passion waits for you,
Oh to let my eyes reside upon you again,
Alas all this waiting is so hard…
I keep looking at my watch…
You left two hours ago on a three-hour flight,
Not long now…then we will be together,
Why didn’t I say yes and go with you?
Such torture these last six months have been,
Work home…with always you in my thoughts,
But soon the waiting will be over so soon…
Just to hear your wondrous voice in full song,
Oh my beautiful angel my nickname for you,
You always seemed to glow…always smiling,
I never once saw a frown or heard angry words,
You never complained, even when I was late,
Work always work…some many hours away,
I have found another job, one with normal hours,
Now I can be there for you always my love,
Why is everyone rushing to the lounge?
Must be a celebrity arriving or in there…
Smiling I go and see what the fuss is all about,
Still half an hour to go…before my love lands,
Then for some reason, something makes me turn,
Standing by the gateway entrance…is my angel,
Smiling and waving…confused yet happy,
I run and catch her in a sweeping embrace,
Finally I put her down, and ask her when?
She just puts a finger to my lips saying hush,
That is when I see for the first time a glistening tear,
Before I can speak she says I love you always,
I have to go for a little while, but wanted to say goodbye,
I don’t cry my love it is just for a little while,
We will be together soon…you will see…
Then she looks over my shoulder and smiles,
I look…but when I turn back she is gone….
It is then that I hear that flight 843 crashed,
There were no survivors…her flight….
But she was just here…then it hit me hard.
Sudden Cramp in my left arm…as my heart clenches in agony,
I was born with a weak heart condition,
After hearing about her flight, I guess it was too much,
Now I know what she meant about being together soon
By Sapphire Blue
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:50:17 PM AEST
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very emotional and beautifully composed
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by SidneyCid on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:06:02 PM AEST
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| My! how sad. I truly hope it is fiction. If not my thoughts are with you. Cheers, SidneyCid |
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by SidneyCid on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:08:32 PM AEST
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:43:04 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:15:17 PM AEST
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wow this is beautiful and sad .. amazing and touching write.. awesome job
peace and hope
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by wray on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:04:16 AM AEST
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| Somewhat depressing, especially the way you ended it without showing us the happy reunion! Nice story tho =) |
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:42:12 AM AEST
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Such an hard hitting poem, i love the intensity of it. A very honest poem. 5/5
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:17:32 AM AEST
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this is a very goor, no, great! write!
It was so emotional, when you said you wrote it with your heart, you wern't hesitating.
GREAT WRITE!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:52:46 AM AEST
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this is deeply full of expression.
it's very powerful!
very beautiful.
i like the flow, despite it not rhyming.
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 08:37:17 AM AEST
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Truly a sad write.
It brought tears to my eyes.
May you find peace and keep writting the great words you write.
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Re: My angels Fallen
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 08:28:59 PM AEST
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Sweet sad and happy
Very good write with loving thoughts.Beautifuly done.
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