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Want to be needed...
Contributed by
Unheard_Mute
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:45:34 PM in AEST
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For fifteen years...
For fifteen years I've slowly died,
As if no one cares what I feel inside,
Hide my emotions, cover my past,
Hoping my happiness will last,
Hoping friendship will cover the pain,
Keep me happy, keep me sane...
But for fifteen years...
But for fifteen years,
I've bled tears,
Crying in the darkness so no one hears,
Alone in the darkness with myself and my fears...
Fifteen years...
Fifteen years of hurt and hate,
Alone by myself without a mate,
The world's too late, I found my fate,
The rate was too fast I couldn't last...
These fifteen years...
These fifteen years of my life have hurt so bad,
I am hated cause I'm related by my own dad,
It's sad, he never wanted me, wanted to throw me away,
He tells this and yells this every single day...
And then these fifteen years...
And then these fifteen years were made even worst,
Had to wait and watch as my mother suffered this curse,
Her addiction and prediction of her endless fall,
Lost my trust as my heart bust and no longer stand tall...
And for fifteen years...
And for fifteen years the world hasn't cared,
No one that wants me, no emotions is shared,
I want someone to contradict this and prove the world wrong,
I've wanted to be needed for oh so long,
I want to be needed, it would make me complete,
They would need only me, no reasone to compete,
Others want lust, companions or trust,
But all of those things just fill me with disgust,
I just want someone who's happy just to be in my embrace,
They feel happy and protected as our bodies enlace,
Head on my chest, hear my heart beat,
Their head I caress as they feel my heat...
My last fifteen years...
My last fifteen years have been hell,
If it'll ever get better I can't tell,
But I find another who needs someone like me,
Then I don't know... maybe, we'll see...
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:54:29 PM AEST
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So much sorrow and tormented agony...how can such as thee pairs such a burden....most unfair...why is this world closing its eyes to such sadness and grief.
Your poetry is so beautiful even for what you have had to bare all those years....so much talent...written in inks tears...may you find the one you look for...to embrace as friends...not in passion but in companionship...no lust..like I have no place for such an emotion...but then at my age that is a thing for the younger generations...
May you find peace of heart...and the love you so truely deserve. |
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by brown_eyez_ on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:06:07 PM AEST
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| this poem hit me hard.....i'm really sry about what you have been goin through.....and to some extent i feel your pain.....its so *****ty when u feel like people could careless if your around or not.....i hope someday u find someone that will make you happy. |
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:41:51 PM AEST
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O James hunni, this broke my heart.. its a great write but you made me cry. Im always here 4 u, ok?
lots of love,
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:52:25 PM AEST
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| aww james. 15 years is a long time to go without receiving what you want. but it just increases the value. i cant believe your father though ::disgust:: maybe you are blind to the world, or it is blind to you. but there is someone that can prove the world wrong. i feel the same way, as probably a lot of people do, so there are plenty of people that need you and you dont even see it =] congratulations on this poem, its the best one youve written in my perspective. want to know why? not only because of how you wrote it, because it was personal. not many can get personal. |
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:30:54 PM AEST
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this is a wonderfully written poem... i am so sorry for wut u have had to go through all these years... fifteen years is a long time to want something and never recieve it... hopefully u get wut u r searching for soon... great write...
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by THORN on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:01:43 PM AEST
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That's amazing, I feel your pain. I can't say I know exactly what you mean or what you're going through, but I understand quite enough to make me cry.
What you're goign through is hard, but hang in there. The good guys always win, yeah? You'll have the last laugh. We all will.
Poetry is the reflection of depression.
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:04:39 PM AEST
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this is so sad...yet so beautiful all at once....its so powerful...i felt your pain....i loved it...excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:17:24 PM AEST
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wow this is a powerful and sad write.. you can feel the sadness and I hope you find your true love everyone needs to be needed !!
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 02:43:34 AM AEST
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| This is a Great write and i know too well how you feel |
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:43:15 AM AEST
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This is so painful to read, i can honestly say i have tears in my eyes, the raw passion of your poem has got me thinking of the futere. a very sad beautiful poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:28:00 AM AEST
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I can't find the words to really leave a comment. When I finished reading your poem I found myself in silence contemplating your words.
Kie |
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:34:25 AM AEST
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I .. I'm speechless. Impeccably written. I hope you'll find happiness.
Anne
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:00:59 PM AEST
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| I can feel this write a lot. It's beautifully worded. I feel into your words to smoothly. Great Write. |
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Re: Want to be needed...
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by killingmehslowly on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:45:43 PM AEST
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| wow. I don't know what to say. what to think. just wow. James that's amazing, REALLY amazing. Not only is it an intense write but I can feel the emotions. And I shall remind you again. I'm here...whenever and if ever ya need me. Now i'm really happy i managed to get online and read your poems amazing-ful-ness. It brought tears to my eyes, i kid you not. |
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:13:56 PM AEST
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Wow...again, this is amazing. I love your style..and your words...and your thoughts. I just sat there and thought after finnishing this. I love your work. I feel the same...Others want lust, companions or trust,
But all of those things just fill me with disgust,
I just want someone who's happy just to be in my embrace,
They feel happy and protected as our bodies enlace,
Head on my chest, hear my heart beat,
That is just one piece of the poem that i loved. And i know what you mean...I want to be wanted...need to be needed. This is perfect. |
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