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THE DARKNESS
Contributed by
LEMMEN
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:25:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The rain has come but once again
Clouds of darkness
Float through my head
Droplet's of death shower
my soul
For my life is empty
just like a hole
The sun has not showed
her face since
I was ten years old
My days have been so dark
only GOD knows
Can't seem to wake
from this dark life of mine
Showers of blood flow
from my flesh
as I bleed out the pain
of life
And look forward to the day
all of my blood has gone
away
Living in madness is
normal to me just wish
I could see the light shine
Down on me
No where to run
No where to hide
All i can do is just
bleed inside and out
As my tears of blood
CRY
FOR
HELP
By Dennis Lemmen
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-12-14 19:25:47]
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Re: THE DARKNESS
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by Apolla on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:39:51 PM AEST
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| I really had to comment on this poem because it was so beautiful in so many ways that it really touched my heart and soul. I know exactly the kind of pain you are feeling. |
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Re: THE DARKNESS
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:21:52 AM AEST
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This was a great write!
Beautifully writen!
I loved this, so heart filled, so emotional, so sad.
One of the best poems I've read.
Great job DENNIS
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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Re: THE DARKNESS
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:13:50 PM AEST
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| Your poem defined the way I feel in many ways. I felt it so much that I could sit here and cry b/c it makes me think of everything that causes me pain. Very touching write. |
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Re: THE DARKNESS
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by witch_derna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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I hope I bring some comfort to you. True we both have our pains but we just need to turn to each other. Sad but beautiful write.
Love, MaDonna |
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Re: THE DARKNESS
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:22:01 AM AEST
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Brillant. Dennis this poem is so beautifully written and I felt the emotions that were put into this poem.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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