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LOVE FLOWS
Contributed by
LEMMEN
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:11:52 PM in AEST
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A warmth of love flows across my skin.
As she holds me close a tear falls from within.
I lay broken and bruised on my back this my worst day.
But she there healing my wounds as she would anyway.
She just sits and watches my pain this my worst day.
I can see her sadness the pain in her eyes
She just sits there and cares and tears come from my eyes.
She is an angel god has sent from above.
Her healing touch embraces my wounds.
The warmth of her love surrounds my heart.
How could a man such as me deserve such a love.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-12-14 19:11:52]
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Re: LOVE FLOWS
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:13:41 PM AEST
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a very powerful and deep poem *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: LOVE FLOWS
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:23:45 PM AEST
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Please 4 give me 4 being blunt and no way is it meant to be judgemental.
What I feel and see in this write is that if God's sent u an agel to help u heal then please, learn to luv yourself.
I read these writes and trust me they are good as far as stucture and writing goes but they break my heart. It's obvious that u have a great need to luv yourself. I had aperiod back after my mom died in 1979 and I cut my self on the wrist once. fortunatly god sent my Mom in an agel form to encourage while I was sleeping. I had three kids that were todllers and close at the time, somehow they helped me to wind my will to live again 'cause I was a single parent and had no help from his father. Sorry didn't mean to write a book but do something for me, please? WEhen u get up everyday got ot your mirro and look at yourself and say. "I know I'm somebody 'cause God don't make no junk."
Keep telling u that everytime u see a mirror.
eventually it will change your life and u will find the will to keep on keeping on.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
to luv others u have to get out of your own pain with acceptence of your self then u can luv others.
smile, my firend 'cause God luvs u 'cause he sent u an agel. smiles. |
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Re: LOVE FLOWS
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by wray on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:37:38 PM AEST
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| Very touched. Bittersweet but more sweet than bitter. I like how it feels so personal, even to the reader - makes me wonder if there's an angel standing by and watching me, loving me. How could anyone deserve such a love.. |
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Re: LOVE FLOWS
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:07:25 PM AEST
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| Love is freely given, and for you god must see a soul worth saving...I see strenght and willingness within your words...tenderness and intensity...may you one day find a way past this sad time of your life and move onto something great....your poetry shows great talent...I can see an author with alot of promise...may your words always soothe away your tears. |
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Re: LOVE FLOWS
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by witch_derna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:18:23 PM AEST
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Not only flesh wounds are healed. But inner wounds to. We are healing each other slowly but surley :)
Love, MaDonna |
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