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Gentle Breeze
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:08:09 PM in AEST
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You came to me on a gentle breeze,
Brought me down on my knees,
The way you kissed me was mind blowing,
All this time I spent not knowing.
That love could feel this good,
My last relationship drew so much blood,
You gave me something to cherish,
Even in time it will not perish.
You swept across me like a secret wind,
Now to your heavenly body I cling,
Hoping that forever with me you will stay,
I hope another gust of wind doesn’t sweep you away.
Around you I feel so relaxed & calm,
I know with you I will come to no harm,
When you hold me I feel myself fall,
Deeper in love as your soul calls.
Your heart is soft & your heart is pure,
I’d never known a love like this before,
Before you drifted into my life & my heart,
Thank you for loving me right from the start.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-14 19:08:09]
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by BennyJay on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:10:27 PM AEST
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| whoa thats really good! |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by wray on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:14:11 PM AEST
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| So sweet! Thanks for lifting up my day =) |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:14:33 PM AEST
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Woah so beautiful..tenderness flowed in waves from such wonderous words... I am glad you have some to love you...it is a good feeling aye...lol oneday I might even be lucky to know that feeling...pity the poor person that fall in love with an unlikely souls such as mine :D
Peace be with ya Pix
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:43:10 PM AEST
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When you write of love ... you hold nothing back . Well really, you hold nothing back when you write, period. Of love ... of depression ... of anything. You have a knack for capturing whatever you feel and pulling your reader right in there next to you.
I love it !!
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by OnAngelswings on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:45:59 PM AEST
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| so sweet and beautiful...so I see I am not the only one in love....Very good Pixie....Shari |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:04:03 PM AEST
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Very romantic and positive. Nice flow
Wonderful write
Willofree |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by MMISS on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:36:42 PM AEST
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| sweet and tender, pixie! |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:25:37 AM AEST
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Aww pixie that is so romantic and beautiful.
I love this poem.I think i will save it. :) |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:53:42 AM AEST
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OMG that was just beautiful, it was so romantic, sweet, loving and tender at the same time. Thanks for sharing this Pix.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:26:22 AM AEST
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Oh, that was so great pixie, I loved it,
your so talented.
It was so romantic,
* sigh...*
it was beautiful : )
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Gentle Breeze
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by ButchCorpuz on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:44:21 AM AEST
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| Absoulutely amazing! This poem reflects the kind of love that makes you want to go on living. There's only one word that can truly describe your work, Pixie, and that is... INSPIRED!!! |
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