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Summer Breath
Contributed by
aceJace
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:37:58 PM in AEST
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Look to the sky for me, my love,
without the tears of the fading blossom,
For I will go as far as you will take me.
Let the day begin with sunlight on green stillness,
and the hot breath of summer
cascading into gentle sounds of comfort.
I'll wait for you in that breeze,
between folly and fame
I will choose the ease of the daydream,
and in it I will build a place for you.
Do you sleep and wait for me to come?
Or can you let the day end, as it began,
without madness.
Copyright ©
aceJace
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2004-12-14 17:37:58]
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Re: Summer Breath
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:45:08 PM AEST
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oooh nice!
Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: Summer Breath
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:51:24 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! Nice post... |
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Re: Summer Breath
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:07:13 PM AEST
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This is delectable.
Welcome to the site.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
What a gem!
Stitch |
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