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Waste My Heart
Contributed by
Emmie74
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 04:50:35 PM in AEST
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(Yes, I know it's crappy, I just don't care)
Was it all a lie
from beginning to end?
why did you do this,
will we ever mend?
Tell me you feel
tell me my dear
do you feel no love?
this is my fear
you say you need time
you say you don’t know
make up your mind
so if I need to, I can go
These thoughts, this pain
please, don’t start
I just want to know
why did you waste my heart
I’d like to hit you
to slap you and cry
the last thing I want to do
is say goodbye
Copyright ©
Emmie74
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2004-12-14 16:50:35]
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Re: Waste My Heart
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by holy on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:00:53 PM AEST
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| dont feel lonely and sad ,all will better day after day,care yourself to have a nice start |
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Re: Waste My Heart
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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god . . . how lipbittingly heartstoppingly terrifyingly awful for you. I'm so sorry, and that doesn't mean anything, of course-- how could it? "sorry"s, especially from someone you don't even know, don't mean a hell of a lot when something like this happens-- but I am. Nothing much I can say . . . just, beautiful poem, and my thoughts are with you, and I'm truly sorry, and I hope you find brighter tomorrows, and--
yeah, I'll shut up now ^^.
hugs (gotta be the first time I've typed that to someone I've never talked to before),
Nora |
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Re: Waste My Heart
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by Thegirlwithsolittle on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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| thanx, you put the words i cannot down, you have spoken the thingsd i held inside, hoiw can you know so much when your heart is tron to pieces? i truely hope thigs ar ebetter now and i hope you can understand that i know you are in pain. v.v.v.v.great job. i ope you can feel all the things he cannot obviuosly feel. |
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Re: Waste My Heart
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:46:17 PM AEST
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oh, em... i don't even know what to say....
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i hope everything works out for the best. i'm only an email away if you need me.
dee |
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