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YOU ARE
Contributed by
summerwine
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:47:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The brilliance of a thousand angel's fluttering wings
Illuminate my soul each and every time you are near me...
For you are the one who inspires such prose
My love, my life, my reality...
I write your name on every breath
I sing your name to the highs and the depths,
You are my reason for being...
You are this glow upon my face
You make me know that I have found my place...
I want you with an unquenchable desire
You are the sustenance who feeds my fire...
So I declare to you, here and now
Forever and a day...
There could never be another
Only you my eternal lover, and
By my side forever.... please stay
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summerwine
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Re: YOU ARE
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:54:14 PM AEST
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WOW!! This blew me away.... beautiful write...
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Re: YOU ARE
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:55:55 PM AEST
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I write your name on every breath
This line alone made this write worth reading. "You are my reason" is a little on the trite side, but I can understand why you used it here.
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Re: YOU ARE
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by OnAngelswings on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:51:36 PM AEST
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| This is absolutely beautiful ....I love the way you say things...very nice...Shari |
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Re: YOU ARE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 02:14:24 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece, excellent.
Johnny. |
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Re: YOU ARE
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:46:27 AM AEST
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Beautiful
The feelings of being in love.Nicely written.YOU ARE good.
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Re: YOU ARE
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:39:11 AM AEST
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Awww, so much love :D Very pleasant read :D
Anne :) |
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