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I'm sick of life
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:55:18 AM in AEST
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I've always felt I was sick of life
I can relate to a song by godsmack
Sick of life
Like them I never wanted to be sick of life
But I am and it's drivin me crazy
I tired of everything
Nothing goes as planned
I wanna to end it all
I just dont know how
I'm really sick of life now
Hurt and wanting to get out
I hate being sick of life
But I'm here and I'm living
Only hoping to see her smiling face
Only to hold her close
For her I'm alive
Without her I'll always be
Sick of life
Will someone please help me
Keep her from walking away
So I can tell her how I feel
Please baby listen to me
When I say
I'm sick of life
Only you can help me
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Re: I'm sick of life
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:54:15 PM AEST
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"I never wanted to be SICK - of - my life
I'm tired of everything - in my life."
One of Godsmack's worthwhile songs. I can definately see the relation in the poem. Nice write. |
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Re: I'm sick of life
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 06:12:22 PM AEST
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| Just an opinion, so take it light. I believe that writers and songwriters have a responsibility. Not every one is right- minded you know. Some take song literally. It wasn't their intent, but all the same, people don't see it that way. I enjoyed reading because I like all types of prose. Just beware of songs that have no hidden messages. I love words to all the songs I listen to. There are many people out there like me. But I take the song for what it is ~ entertainment and nothing more. Take care and remember, it was just my opinion and not an attack upon you. |
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Re: I'm sick of life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 08:20:31 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem. Im seriously sick of this life and have since given up on ever finding happiness in this world. But i'll bet you have someone to help you (If this is based on your life) This was a great write whether this was you talking or someone else! |
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