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Dying Inside
Contributed by
vindicated_lozer
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:56:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Without your love
Or anything of importance
Happiness is void
Nothing to live for
Nothing to strive for
So please
Take my hand,
And show me how it is
To feel
To breathe
To live
To love
And to be loved
Copyright ©
vindicated_lozer
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2004-12-14 08:56:10]
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Re: Dying Inside
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:56:22 PM AEST
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| Short, simple, and sweet. Good heartfelt write. |
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Re: Dying Inside
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:54:27 PM AEST
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short, sweet and to the point...i liked it...great write..excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Dying Inside
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 04:13:29 PM AEST
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| Very powerful . It embodies what I am feeling to the fullest... |
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Re: Dying Inside
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by Apolla on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:38:59 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point, usually these are the best type of poems. Beautiful write. |
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